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Fallen angel

This fallen angel......cannot fly
                             believed the lies
                             was loves demise
                             silently cries
                             

This fallen angel.....will retake flight
                            regain her sight
                            refind the light
                            rebuild her might
                                              
                            She will fly again
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This is about defeat in love and rebirth in strength

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:iconolivia-ann:
I really like this, especially the lines "Believed the lies, Was love's demise."
Lovely, keep it up! :)

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<3 o.

maybe i'm a little bit over my head
i come undone by the things he said
and he's so funny in his bright red shirt
we were all in love
and we all got hurt
:iconsynadam:
A great poem, I was gone for the weekend and when I come back and check in I find a great poem like this :) Makes coming back worth it for sure

Keep up the great work :)
:iconheiteinah:
wow... WOW OMGWTF
amazing! *_*

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"O maior erro do ser humano é ter medo de errar"
:iconmy-soul-is-shattered:
Wow thank you very much..

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I write from my soul...
:iconmy-soul-is-shattered:
I am glad it you liked it.....Please read my other work..

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I write from my soul...
:iconmy-soul-is-shattered:
Thank you......

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I write from my soul...
:iconmy-soul-is-shattered:
Thank you....

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I write from my soul...
:iconsynadam:
I will do, as soon as I have a chance. As i said I've been gone for the weekend and I have a lot of catching up to do:P

Be sure though, I'll definately look into it, as I already know your quality of work :)

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September 4, 2006
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