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Forget

She tries to forget
his smile
his eyes
his voice

She needs to forget
his kiss
his embrace
his heart

As much as she needs
to forget all of this
the thought of never
remembering his LOVE
is more pain than she can take
:iconmy-soul-is-shattered:

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I am not sure if I like this one or not... is just how I feel right now..

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:icondedhedpoet:
I think it's very good. Very heart felt. =)
:iconmy-soul-is-shattered:
Thank you- I wasn't sure about it- was a format style for me..I wasn't sure it flowed right..

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I write from my soul...
:icondusk1983:
As one who has tried to forget A LOT, I can relate very much to this poem.
its very pretty.

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My shoes are too tight, but it doesn't matter for I have forgotten how to dance.- Londo Mollari
:iconmy-soul-is-shattered:
I try to forget alot of things too--- but I never works. Thank you- you are way too nice to me :hug:

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I write from my soul...
:iconlakrisdrops:
Very good, as always though :hug:

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I Love You
:iconmy-soul-is-shattered:
Aww thank you hun....you are always so kind :hug:

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I write from my soul...
:iconlakrisdrops:
I'm just being honest :hug: :aww:

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I Love You
:iconmy-soul-is-shattered:
Great Big :hug:s for you Hon.....

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I write from my soul...

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October 20, 2006
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