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People

Have you ever met the plastic people
they are the ones who are rigid
they are the ones who are fake

Have you ever met the transparent people
they are the ones you can see thru
they are the ones that can't hide their dislike

Have you ever met the me me me people
they only want to discuss themselves
they only see their life and no one elses

Have you ever met the pity people
they only want to feel sorry for you
they only need you to make themselves feel better

Have you ever met the perfect people
they only want to judge your life
they only want to seek out your faults

Have you ever met the rose colored glasses people
they are the ones that only see what they want to
they are the ones that  never see the truth


Have you ever met the back stabbing people
they are the ones that spread the lies
they are the ones that cannot be trusted

Have you ever met the broken people
they are the ones with the shattered souls
they are the ones with the nightmare dreams

Have you ever met the special people
they always want nothing but your happiness
they always want what is the best for you

Have you ever met the forgiving people
they are the ones that always accept you
they are the ones that will help you back up

Have you ever met the laughter people
they are the ones that always make you smile
they are the ones that surround you with joy

Have you ever met the soulmate people
they are the ones that hear your heart
they are the ones that feel your soul

I have met all of these people in my life
they have come and gone like the wind
they have all left their mark on my life.......
:iconmy-soul-is-shattered:

Author's Comments

I know this is a long one-- but this is about all the different types of people you meet through out your life

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:icondedhedpoet:
Very nice....I much liked how the second half talks about the good people as compared to the first half talking about the bad people. So what kind of person do you think I am?? hmm?? hehe, very Wicked, my sista!
:iconmy-soul-is-shattered:
I think you are with me in the wickedly broken.. I need to do a people part 2... Wicked people would have to be one as would the twisted people....Thank you my brotha!!

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I write from my soul...
:icondedhedpoet:
Wickedly broken...ahhh yes. Sounds good to me =) It's always a pleasure reading your work because I can relate to your wicked words, my sista. =)
:iconheiteinah:
Very deep poem...
I will add a line for myself

"Have you ever met someone who can see beyond your eyes?
Someone who can see far deep into your soul
But canīt see themselves"

Itīs like a "special power" of mine.

U know... I can find out almost everything about a person only by looking at their eyes.

They never hid something from me.

If someday we do meet personaly, i will look at your eyes, in the deepest fashion possible, and i will dig out your soul, and i think, that probally (i hope :P) u will be impressed Xhahaehaha


bye bye
GREAT poem

This one goes to the... fav gallery ^^v

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"O maior erro do ser humano é ter medo de errar"
:iconzoidbergmerc:
i love this poem, but i think it would be even more powerful if you had the "have you met the back stabbing people" at the very end, to make it end on a sour note, becuase 99% of people are shit, you might not feel the same way and i hate to critisize you becuase you are the expert, thats just my 2c worth =P

I have met all the nasty ones you mention, i am yet to meet all the nice ones

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~NIN-FC ~Tool-group
=291 *Ex-po-zure
:iconskydragondancer:
Love it- very nice,very nicely written:clap: and -not ...dark:faint: LOL.Only teasing Dear !!:hug:

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"Presume not that I am the thing I was" ..Shakespeare
:iconwiputra:
hmmm yeah this poem basically sums up all the people we met in our lives :D

how about 'confused people', people who don't know where they're going :laughing:

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~wiputra
:iconmy-soul-is-shattered:
I had so many more I could have added-- I think I need to do The People part 2 :) Glad you liked it:)

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I write from my soul...
:iconmy-soul-is-shattered:
Glad you liked it hun...I am not always dark lol:):hug:

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I write from my soul...
:iconmy-soul-is-shattered:
I know what you mean...but I promise there are good people out there... Thank you and you are not the only person that thought that :)

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I write from my soul...

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